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Benjamin J. Smith's avatar

This was a great read. Thanks for putting it out there!

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lua's avatar

this is very loose for an essay. could use some editing and the ideas could've been worked better, expanded on

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Yah Yah Scholfield's avatar

Oh! Thanks for your input. It wasn't meant to be very complex, and there's more than one way to write an essay. thanks, though!

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